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Discussion in 'D.I.Y. - Creative section' started by NumberLast, Jun 9, 2011.

  1. NumberLast

    NumberLast Active Member Forum Member


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    Punk's not about the clothes you wear,
    Or the color of your spikey hair,
    Punk's not a fucking fashion statement,
    And it's not about being pretty vacant,
    Punk's about the way you feel inside,
    Oppressed by a government you despise,

    Chaos punks dressed like circus freaks,
    Parade around the city streets,
    Circling their A's for anarchy,
    But they don't even know what it means,

    A brick through a window,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    A riot in Oakland,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    Graffiti propaganda,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    The punk revolution,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    Cuz' chaos won't set us free,

    Destruction is not an end, but the means to an end

    A brick through a window,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    A riot in Oakland,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    Graffiti propaganda,
    DON'T MEAN SHIT!
    Cuz' chaos ain't anarchy

    tell me what you think and gimme some title suggestions :thumbsup:
     

  2. persona-non-grata

    persona-non-grata Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    awesome lyrics do you have a beat to it already?

    title suggestions:
    don't mean shit
    anarchy is order

    :ecouteurs: :beer:
     
  3. punkmar77

    punkmar77 Experienced Member Uploader Experienced member


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    As much as I agree with your sentiments about chaos/street punks....

    1. An anarchist led uprising in Oakland over the murder of Oscar Grant...does mean something.
    2. A brick through a bank window in London, Madrid, Barcelona, Athens, or Washington D.C. also means the people have had enough
    3. Graffiti/Wheat pasting can be a very effective means of communication when all other media is owned and controlled by capital

    just food for thought....
     
  4. NumberLast

    NumberLast Active Member Forum Member


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    Punkmar, I know all of these things. "Destruction is not an end, but the means to an end" all of these have been succesful strategies for fighting oppression. But they are also abused by fashion idiot chaos punks. The point being that they don't mean shit without a purpose. I meant to express that but it doesn't seem to have come through. Any suggestions for a more succinct way to put it across?
     
  5. punkmar77

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    I think you might want to add one last verse clarifying that position,

    Doesn't quite do it, specially when the shouted choruses will probably come through a lot more clearly than the verses, I think people will misunderstand what the message really is unless you really put it down the way you just explained it in your paragraph...
     
  6. NumberLast

    NumberLast Active Member Forum Member


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    Hmm, how about this inserted in place of
    Lousy chaos boys and vapid chaos girls,
    Make me want to fuckin' hurl,
    Don't understand the relevence of their actions,
    Too busy with chemical distractions,

    If you never understand,
    How will you defeat the man,
    Destruction must concieve creation,
    To topple social stratification.

    Whacha think?
    :thumbsup: :ecouteurs:
     
  7. vAsSiLy77

    vAsSiLy77 Experienced Member Uploader Experienced member Forum Member


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    Bit too much dissing the poor street kids for my cup of tea - for my little poetry I try to picture what I believe in or what people I like believe in. I still need more practice to find the right expressions myself, so don't get me wrong, it's justa thought:
    I think even if the critiques are right and accurate/correct, the chaos kids won't change their ways - so it's more important to spread our ideas and ideals than to spread their menace/stupidity/blindness.
     
  8. NumberLast

    NumberLast Active Member Forum Member


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    I write songs as they come to me. I was tired of watching rich upper middle class chaos punks smash shit and make the rest of us look like ignorant assholes, so I wrote this song.
     
  9. punksnskins

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    i look like a chaos punk but my ideals are the same as yours NumberLast, what does that make me :S
     
  10. NumberLast

    NumberLast Active Member Forum Member


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    I dress in crust pants, kilts, and leather jackets. I suppose I probably look like a consumate punk but I'm all about Ideals. The point being that fashion is secondary to ideals. the moment fashion supercedes your belief system, that's when you're a chaos punk.
     
  11. persona-non-grata

    persona-non-grata Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    aye up the kilts (no ice cream though that is COLD) do you wear yr kilt like a kilt or like a skirt (with or without undies)?

    [video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MZ35SOU9HTM&feature=related[/video]

    :ecouteurs:
    nutz!
     
  12. NumberLast

    NumberLast Active Member Forum Member


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    Properly outside of school but w/ undies at school. they don't take to kindly to bare-assed cartwheels.
     
  13. persona-non-grata

    persona-non-grata Experienced Member Experienced member Forum Member


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    haha niether did they at my school (before I got kicked out for unrelated reasons) did it anyway :p I love the reactions I get when wearing a kilt :p

    :ecouteurs:
    nutz!
     
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